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Showing posts with label chat about writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label chat about writing. Show all posts

Friday, January 20, 2012

Guest Blogger LOIS WINSTON talks about "The Happy Hooker"


The Happy Hooker
Guest Blogger, Author Lois Winston

No, this is not about the world’s oldest profession. It’s about opening hooks. Do you know how few seconds an author has to hook an agent, an editor, or a reader? Precious few. Attention spans just aren’t what they used to me. If you don’t hook a reader (and by readers, I mean agents, editors, and the reading public) with the first page of your book, chances are, she won’t read the second page.

Too many writers make the mistake of opening their books with long passages of description and back-story. So not a good idea! Especially when you open with a description of the weather. There’s a reason Snoopy kept getting all those rejection letters whenever he submitted his novel that opened with, “It was a dark and stormy night…”

It’s also the reason that a well known annual writing contest for the worst opening lines is named for Edward George Bulwer-Lytton, the actual author of that famous line. It appeared in his 1830 novel Paul Clifford. Ever read the complete opening sentence? Most people haven’t.

Here it is:
It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents--except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets (for it is in London that our scene lies), rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness.

READ THE WHOLE ARTICLE AND FIND OUT MORE ABOUT LOIS BY CLICKING ON THE JANUARY 2012 ISSUE OF THE WRITERS' TRICKS OF THE TRADE E-ZINE. SHARE THIS WITH YOUR WRITER FRIENDS.

Monday, December 5, 2011

I was interviewed by British author/blogger Morgen Bailey today

Today I've gone "across the Pond" to England...at least via cyberspace. British  author/blogger Morgen Bailey (Morgen with an 'e') interviewed me on her blog (http://wp.me/p18Ztn-1qo) and we had a good time teasing back and forth that Morgen (with an 'e') was interviewing Morgan with an 'a'.

Morgen Bailey
Morgen has been a WordPress blogger since late March 2011, writing group leader of critique and writing
workshops since March 2008, and 'Bailey's Writing Tips' podcaster since August 2010. Like me, she is one busy woman. Morgen says, "...oh, and sometimes in between, I write."


Hers is really a terrific blog. She has interviewed over 200 people in the publishing industry, and I'm proud to be Blog Inteview Number 208, so while you are there explore her site and read about other authors, publishers, editors, etc.

I look forward to Morgen contributing an article or more to the Writers' Tricks of the Trade newsletter in 2012. We will welcome her as one of our global guest contributors. The web brings us all together to share ideas, tips, techniques and interviews regardless of which corner of the globe we call home.

Happy Monday. A post about the Sisters in Crime/LA holiday party later in the day.

Monday, October 17, 2011

My Facebook Page was Hacked!

Well, I guess no one is safe. Today, much to my dismay, I discovered that I was supposedly stranded in Barcelona and needed quick cash. At least that's what a hacker was trying to communicate to my entire email list. Not only that, but they totally wiped out my Silver Sisters Mysteries Facebook account.

Not that I wouldn't want to go back to Barcelona. I was there for four days a few years ago and loved it, but didn't have to contact every person I'd ever shared an email communication with to bail me out.

Getting serious, I've spent the ENTIRE DAY trying to straighten things out. They say that when you use all capital letters, it's like shouting. Yep. That's me. I'm shouting mad. This is an old scam, and who falls for these things anyway? Particularly when you are supposed to be contacting someone you barely know to send you money. But the hackers continue to do it anyway. A friend from Sisters in Crime told me they had her stranded in Scotland and she hasn't straightened it out yet. At this time of year, I think the weather in Barcelona is probably a lot better. No offense to Scotland, but I don't do well in cold.

After wrestling with this, putting everything else aside and finally deciding there was only one thing I could do as a last resort, I now have a new Facebook account. I lost every friend contact on the old one, so if you were my friend, or would like to be, try to find Morgan St James without a period after the St. That's me. Sometimes it comes up in the search and sometimes not, but that's probably because it's brand new.

If you are a hacker, please don't do it again. Once is enough. I can't send requests to my old friends yet, because Facebook has barred me from doing that for a few days. You see, the hacker got in and destroyed everything, but I can't use Facebook to contact my friends or family just in case I'm a spammer. Where's the justice?

Meanwhile, the new newsletter is getting great comments and I'm delighted. That helped to even out the frustration of today's events. New contributors are contacting me, and future issues will be great.

Have a good night. I was supposed to go to Henderson Writers' Group tonight, and looked forward to hearing work to be critiqued, but instead I'm chilling out. Trust me. I know when I need quiet time!

MORGAN

Wednesday, August 17, 2011

What you can learn from a BAD REVIEW

I hear feedback from many authors. What is one big fear? A bad review. Many of us have had that experience, justly or unjustly,  and it can be traumatic.

Reacting to the bad news

Your worst nightmare has come true. The book you thought would be a blockbuster has gotten a bad review. Does that mean the world will come crashing down around you? Maybe yes, and maybe no.

Sure. You do have to acknowledge that there is always the possibility that the reviewer’s comments were well deserved, in which case it may be something to heed for your next book. But, before you go bonkers, ask yourself this question as the author: How many good reviews have you gotten vs. bad ones?

Then put on your reviewer’s hat. Was your book edited well? Did the plot hold together? Was the writing tight? Is there a market for your genre? There are so many factors that might come to light when a reviewer or reader attacks your baby.   
     
Keep an open mind

The first thing to remember is to keep an open mind, and sometimes that’s hard. Maybe you’ve seen the rash of posts on Facebook about a self-published book on Smashwords that got a bad review and set off a firestorm of comments from Facebook Friends and retaliation by the author because she simply got very angry.  In this case, I felt the reviewer’s critique was valid. The angry author could have learned a lot from what was said, had she kept an open mind.

What the reviewer said

Among other reasons for giving the book two stars, the reviewer pointed out: “One reason is the spelling and grammar errors, which come so quickly that, especially in the first several chapters, it’s difficult to get into the book without being jarred back to reality as you attempt unraveling what the author meant.”

We have all seen books like that, and it’s a real turn-off.

To be fair, I previewed the first twenty percent of this book, a benefit which is standard for most Smashwords books. I didn’t find lots of spelling errors—perhaps they were corrected in a subsequent edit—but there were many grammatical errors. As for editing, it really needed tightening and a good going over to eliminate sentences like this one: She carried her stocky build carefully back down the stairs. What did she do? Pick up her build while gingerly placing her feet on the stair treads?

Were I reviewing it, I would have asked, “How many pages can an author dedicate to discussing a fish dinner?” In this case she filled several opening pages with boring conversation about the fish dinner. She would have lost me right in the beginning. As a reviewer, my suggestion would have been to boil the opening down to a few paragraphs.

Be careful about becoming hostile

If you simply get hostile and tell yourself the reviewer is stupid, you will never consider whether they could have been right. Speaking from experience, I haven’t received many bad reviews for my own books. They are usually 4s and 5s. But, I have gotten a few stinkers. When that happens, sure my feelings are hurt, but I try to analyze what the reviewer said and why. I have found some things I now spot right away as I write my current novels.

What their comments might tell you

Do their comments absolutely mean the book wasn’t good? Perhaps it simply was not their thing. Did the reviewer have a personal agenda that got shaken up by the book? I got one review that cited the reasons the reader gave it three stars. Every one of those points was an emotion I’d been striving to touch in the reader. It turned out, this reader wrapped it up by saying she didn’t like sad books, but felt it was well written and that it kept her turning pages.

So what did that mean ultimately? My take was that I touched her deeply. In my mind the 3 star became a 5 star because the book did what I wanted it to.

Is the review by a reader on Amazon, or is it a professional review? Unfortunately, some people who review on Amazon have the sole purpose of shooting bullets at the author. I know that sounds judgmental, but if that happens, click their name and look at some of their other reviews before going into meltdown. Particularly if there are snarky remarks. I had one like that for Devil’s Dance (a novel I wrote as Arliss Adams that had many excellent reviews).

React appropriately, then move on

What did I discover? That this reviewer prided herself on being the toughest reviewer in her book club. She had generated many bad, snarky reviews including several on books that otherwise had top ratings. She was very clear in stating that she rarely gave anything over 2 stars and loved to pull books apart. I let out my breath after reading that. Sadly, those readers have no idea what that can mean to the author. If you review on Amazon, be fair.

Even if you don’t like the comments, they might be valid

But what if what she said had been valid? In that case I could have learned from this review if only I was willing to relax my defenses. A few things are imperative when you get a bad review. Accept what is valid without vehemently defending it, even when you know in your heart the reviewer might be right. Be sure to consider the comments from all angles.

If you reluctantly agree with them, you have learned something for the future. If you honestly can’t find the flaws cited, MOVE ON. Don’t harbor ill feelings or insecurity. If you do, the only one who gets hurt is you.

Happy writing.

Monday, August 1, 2011

An invitation to join Morgan St. James in the Chat Room at www.Savvy Authors.com on Thursday evening, August 4

I’ve recently become involved with www.savvyauthors.com and am delighted to say that I’ll be hosting some online workshops for them in the future.

 In the meantime, I’ll be hosting an online chat about WRITING TIGHT this week on Thursday, August 4. It’s free, interactive and runs from 9:00-10:00 p.m. EST, 8:00 – 9:00 p.m. Central, 7:00 p.m.-8:00 p.m. Mountain time or 6:00-7:00 p.m. PST

 WRITE TIGHT ONLINE CHAT ON SAVVY AUTHORS –CLICK HERE FOR MORE INFO

 This is a great website for all authors to know about and utilize. Savvy Authors started with a simple conversation between two writers trying to figure out how writers at various stages of their career could help one another to achieve their goals. Whether it be promoting their new release, or finding a way to break through chapter three on their first book, the idea was to create a website where authors could network and gain motivation.

See you there,

MORGAN ST. JAMES